The First Chapter Review

Feedback focused on your opening chapter to help you make a strong and confident first impression. I’ll look at clarity, tone, structure, and how effectively your opening draws the reader in.

WHAT’S INCLUDED?

  • In-text comments on your chapter

  • Feedback on opening impact and clarity

  • Suggestions to strengthen flow and engagement

  • A short summary of key recommendations

BEST SUITED TO:

  • Writers preparing to submit or self-publish

  • Authors wanting feedback before continuing their draft

  • Anyone unsure if their opening is working

Investment: £60 – £120 (depending on length)