The First Chapter Review
Feedback focused on your opening chapter to help you make a strong and confident first impression. I’ll look at clarity, tone, structure, and how effectively your opening draws the reader in.
WHAT’S INCLUDED?
In-text comments on your chapter
Feedback on opening impact and clarity
Suggestions to strengthen flow and engagement
A short summary of key recommendations
BEST SUITED TO:
Writers preparing to submit or self-publish
Authors wanting feedback before continuing their draft
Anyone unsure if their opening is working
Investment: £60 – £120 (depending on length)

