The Opening Package

A focused review of the opening section of your manuscript (typically the first 3 to 5 chapters or up to 20,000 words). This service is in place to ensure your story begins as strongly as possible and hooks your readers from the start.

What’s included:

  • Feedback on your opening hook

  • Pacing and structure of early chapters

  • Character introduction and voice

  • Clarity and engagement suggestions

Best for: Writers who want to strengthen their opening and make a strong first impression.

Investment: £0.010 per word