The Full Manuscript Assessment

Okay, so this is the big one.

The detailed, big-picture analysis of your manuscript designed to help you strengthen your story as a whole. This service focuses on structure, pacing, and character development, as well as line edits—providing clear and actionable feedback to guide your next draft. **This is my most popular service!

What’s included:

  • In-text developmental guidance throughout your manuscript

  • A detailed feedback report with suggestions for improvement on plot, structure, pacing, tension, and character development.

  • Regular check-ins via email

Best for: Writers who want in-depth guidance on how to improve and develop their manuscript and for me to leave comments and feedback in-line.

Investment: £0.015 per word