Explore Services
Beta reading
A reader-focused review of your manuscript, offering honest insight into the overall reading experience. This service highlights how your story feels from a reader’s perspective and identifies areas where engagement, clarity, and flow can be improved.
What’s included:
Feedback on pacing and engagement
Clarity and readability
Character consistency
Overall reader experience
Best for: Writers looking for fresh eyes on their manuscript before moving into deeper edits.
full manuscript assessment
A detailed, big-picture analysis of your manuscript designed to help you strengthen your story as a whole. This service focuses on structure, pacing, and character development, providing clear and actionable feedback to guide your next draft.
What’s included:
Plot and story structure analysis
Pacing and tension feedback
Character development and arcs
Clarity, cohesion, and consistency
A detailed feedback report with suggestions for improvement
Best for: Writers who want in-depth guidance on how to improve and develop their manuscript.
OPening package
A focused review of the opening section of your manuscript (typically the first 3 chapters or up to 10,000 words). This service ensures your story begins as strongly as possible and hooks your reader from the start.
What’s included:
Feedback on your opening hook
Pacing and structure of early chapters
Character introduction and voice
Clarity and engagement
Best for: Writers who want to strengthen their opening and make a strong first impression.
first chapter review
A detailed critique of your first chapter, focusing on how effectively your story begins. This service helps ensure your opening captures attention and sets the tone for the rest of your manuscript.
What’s included:
Opening hook and impact
Clarity and readability
Pacing and flow
Initial character and voice
Best for: Writers who want quick, targeted feedback on their opening chapter.
first 5,000 word critique
A more in-depth look at the opening of your manuscript, allowing for detailed feedback on your writing, pacing, and early story development across multiple scenes.
What’s included:
Early pacing and structure
Character introduction and development
Clarity, flow, and readability
Strength of your opening chapters
Best for: Writers who want more detailed early-stage feedback before continuing with their draft.
Lighter line edits
The lighter editing choice.
An edit of your writing at sentence level, purely available to improve clarity, flow, and readability while maintaining your unique voice. This service focuses solely on refining your writing rather than re-writing it.
What’s included:
Sentence structure and flow
Clarity and conciseness
Tone and consistency
Minor grammar and wording improvements
Best for: Writers looking to polish their manuscript before submission or publication.
“Oh my god thank you so much for the feedback! It’s so unbelievably detailed and helpful, i can definitely use this in my next round of edits!”
– Former Client & Debut Author